From: Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2019 17:39:15 +0000 (+0100) Subject: grammar/reorder X-Git-Url: https://git.libre-soc.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0030b84db39b22060c48439ba68c9e634696495f;p=crowdsupply.git grammar/reorder --- diff --git a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn index 4173188..df82c54 100644 --- a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn +++ b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn @@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being able to declare a full privacy software stack. -Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for these kinds of brave -strategic decisions to kick the trend towards privacy-invading +Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for this type of brave and +strategic decision-making to kick the trend towards privacy-invading hardware "by default." However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we