finish 022 update

diff --git a/updates/022_2020feb14_openpower_eula_released.mdwn b/updates/022_2020feb14_openpower_eula_released.mdwn
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@@ -42,6 +42,8 @@ good and extremely well-designed.
 
 # RISC-V Mailing Lists
 
 
 # RISC-V Mailing Lists
 

+By complete contrast to how OpenPower is being managed...
+

 Since the last update, some of the RISC-V Mailing lists have become "open".
 There was no announcement.  You can't get access to the prior archives.
 Critically important lists - such as the UNIX Platform Working Group -
 Since the last update, some of the RISC-V Mailing lists have become "open".
 There was no announcement.  You can't get access to the prior archives.
 Critically important lists - such as the UNIX Platform Working Group -


@@ -50,9 +52,11 @@ to not be "Fake Open Source".  It's like pulling teeth without an anaesthetic.
 Still, they're finally making an effort.
 
 They still have not responded (as is legally required under their Trademark
 Still, they're finally making an effort.
 
 They still have not responded (as is legally required under their Trademark

-obligations) to any of the twenty to thirty reasonable in-good-faith
-requests for inclusion of Libre Businesses with "full transparency"
-as part of their business objectives.
+obligations) to any of the twenty to thirty very deliberately public,
+prominent, and reasonable in-good-faith
+requests for inclusion in the *innovation* of RISC-V (not just its
+"use", its **innovation**) by Libre Businesses with "full transparency"
+as part of their core business objectives.

 
 Failing to allow public participation in the UNIX WG is particularly
 damaging to RISC-V's reputation.  Telling u-boot and linux kernel developers
 
 Failing to allow public participation in the UNIX WG is particularly
 damaging to RISC-V's reputation.  Telling u-boot and linux kernel developers