important to update about tax agreements

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+++ b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 We are delighted to be able to announce additional sponsorship by
-[Purism](http://puri.sm), through [NLNet](http://nlnet.nl).
+[Purism](http://puri.sm), through [NLnet](http://nlnet.nl).
 
 ### Purism Sponsorship
 
 As a social purpose corporation, Purism is empowered to balance
 ethics, social enterprise, and profitable business. I am delighted that
 they chose to fund the Libre RISC-V hybrid CPU/GPU through the
-[NLNet Foundation](https://nlnet.nl/PET). Their donation provides us some
+[NLnet Foundation](https://nlnet.nl/PET). Their donation provides us some
 extra flexibility in how we reach the goal of bringing to market a hybrid
 CPU, VPU, and GPU that is libre to the bedrock.
 
@@ -27,11 +27,11 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this
 "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being
 able to declare a full privacy software stack.
 
-It is these kinds of brave strategic decisions to kick the trend
-towards privacy-invading hardware "by default" for which Purism
-deserves our respect and gratitude.
+Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for this type of brave and
+strategic decision-making to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
+hardware "by default."
 
-However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we
+However, just as NLnet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we
 cannot stop at just the software.  Profit-maximising corporations just
 do not take the brave decisions that can compromise profits,
 particularly when faced with competition: it's too much. This is why
@@ -186,13 +186,13 @@ is an enormous amount that we do not yet know, yet at the same time,
 never let that stop us from moving forward. A journey starts with a
 first step, and continues with each step.
 
-With help from NLNet and companies like Purism, we can look forward to
+With help from NLnet and companies like Purism, we can look forward to
 actually paying people to contribute to solving what was formerly
 considered an impossible task.
 
 It is worthwhile emphasising: any individual or corporation wishing to
 see this project succeed (so that you can use it as the basis for one
-of your products, for example), donations through NLNet, as a
+of your products, for example), donations through NLnet, as a
 registered charitable foundation, are tax deductible.
 
 Likewise, for anyone who would like to help with the project's