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authorLuke Kenneth Casson Leighton <lkcl@lkcl.net>
Mon, 29 Jul 2019 17:39:15 +0000 (18:39 +0100)
committerLuke Kenneth Casson Leighton <lkcl@lkcl.net>
Mon, 29 Jul 2019 17:39:15 +0000 (18:39 +0100)
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diff --git a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn b/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
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--- a/updates/019_2019jul16_purism_donation.mdwn
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@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ Purism then moved quickly to provide a BIOS update to disable this
 "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being
 able to declare a full privacy software stack.
 
 "feature," eliminating the last and most important barrier to being
 able to declare a full privacy software stack.
 
-Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for these kinds of brave
-strategic decisions to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
+Purism deserves our respect and gratitude for this type of brave and
+strategic decision-making to kick the trend towards privacy-invading
 hardware "by default."
 
 However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we
 hardware "by default."
 
 However, just as NLNet recognises, Purism also appreciates that we