finish 022 update

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@@ -42,6 +42,8 @@ good and extremely well-designed.
 
 # RISC-V Mailing Lists
 
+By complete contrast to how OpenPower is being managed...
+
 Since the last update, some of the RISC-V Mailing lists have become "open".
 There was no announcement.  You can't get access to the prior archives.
 Critically important lists - such as the UNIX Platform Working Group -
@@ -50,9 +52,11 @@ to not be "Fake Open Source".  It's like pulling teeth without an anaesthetic.
 Still, they're finally making an effort.
 
 They still have not responded (as is legally required under their Trademark
-obligations) to any of the twenty to thirty reasonable in-good-faith
-requests for inclusion of Libre Businesses with "full transparency"
-as part of their business objectives.
+obligations) to any of the twenty to thirty very deliberately public,
+prominent, and reasonable in-good-faith
+requests for inclusion in the *innovation* of RISC-V (not just its
+"use", its **innovation**) by Libre Businesses with "full transparency"
+as part of their core business objectives.
 
 Failing to allow public participation in the UNIX WG is particularly
 damaging to RISC-V's reputation.  Telling u-boot and linux kernel developers